Helps cleanse the soul
Let in the rain, wash the hate coming out.
I don't wanna be another bridge burning out, no...
I don't want to hear it, so you said nothing loud
Just took the lit cigarette from your mouth
A whole bridge, whittled down to a plank.
... I'm on the end you left the empty tank.
You smiled but it looked more like a grin.
Your lips said love, but your mind said sin
I can smell you through the fumes.
Gasoline and sweet perfume.
All we're missing is a tune.
To harmonize the flick,
and the boom.
Phunky as Phuck
Oh baby, you know how to diddle those instruments. Mmm mm phunkin specphacular.
This is so inspirational
:3 oh yea teddy
I WILL SERENADE YOU WITH YOUR OWN BEAT.
you get me all excited Teddy :3
:) thanks bro
this is so sick. It's like a majestic mystery beat. You're da bomb tings
This was amazing bro
I'm thinkin the synths at 1:23 could be louder, and more like.. all up in your earphone :p. But amazing work bro. I've been writing a musical way to ask a girl out with this track. You are the mood setter my friend.
Thanks a lot! and I thought I was the only one that thought that about the chorus synth, Ima turn it up a little and update this beat a.s.a.p!
Thanks a lot!
I made a song to the same beat: Yous a Star
The flow is on, but the equalizing is full of static.
It also sounds like you guys are spitting without true emotion-- like it's bland.
Nd the next stuff inbetween verses is a cool idea.. but the reverb is keeping it hard to make out.
I really think you guys can turn this out, but it's just gotta feel more clean, y'know?
Yeah, I already expected the eq to be terrible. The Microphone we are recording on isn't worth it weight in refuse, but thanks for the honest review. Dude your "Oakville" is the ultimate weedblowing song! Appreciate the nod.
This is tight
You work all the vocals into the music real nice, nd I like the message. You got a talent with switching up the rhyme scheme/pauses with the transitions in the music-- but the 9 is for some of the extra vocals. It throws off the main lyrics when it gets too heavy in the last verse
Sick job overall bro.
Ey thx fam for the critic and honesty. Good lookin. Peace!
This is way to hype
I love it aahah makes me like this site that much more :3
But it straight up reminds me of Breath Of Fire 3.
Never heard of that one before Chista
In any case I'm glad you like it(?)
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