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This was amazing bro

I'm thinkin the synths at 1:23 could be louder, and more like.. all up in your earphone :p. But amazing work bro. I've been writing a musical way to ask a girl out with this track. You are the mood setter my friend.

LoveKavi responds:

Thanks a lot! and I thought I was the only one that thought that about the chorus synth, Ima turn it up a little and update this beat a.s.a.p!

Thanks a lot!

I made a song to the same beat: Yous a Star

The flow is on, but the equalizing is full of static.
It also sounds like you guys are spitting without true emotion-- like it's bland.
Nd the next stuff inbetween verses is a cool idea.. but the reverb is keeping it hard to make out.

I really think you guys can turn this out, but it's just gotta feel more clean, y'know?

Dj730 responds:

Yeah, I already expected the eq to be terrible. The Microphone we are recording on isn't worth it weight in refuse, but thanks for the honest review. Dude your "Oakville" is the ultimate weedblowing song! Appreciate the nod.

{L}

This is tight

You work all the vocals into the music real nice, nd I like the message. You got a talent with switching up the rhyme scheme/pauses with the transitions in the music-- but the 9 is for some of the extra vocals. It throws off the main lyrics when it gets too heavy in the last verse

Sick job overall bro.

RemixF2D responds:

Ey thx fam for the critic and honesty. Good lookin. Peace!

~Rymix

So tight

But it straight up reminds me of Breath Of Fire 3.

SHADOWFOX2 responds:

Never heard of that one before Chista
In any case I'm glad you like it(?)

Yoooooawwwww

Straight up everything is bombtingaty ringaty except you got the first bass kicks wayy too distorted, what are you thinking bro. You know better than.

We want the bounce not the shake, ya diggg?

Good shit otherwise

NX177 responds:

huh?

You're a genius

Even though you might think weird whacky thoughts, I'd drink sunny delight to this anyday.

Wheres the sample from?

And the outro.. omg man, that transition was killer. Except instead of just a fade out-- you just have the post part as a whole new song with a faster tempo.

Part 2 or just an extra long song.

You feel me?

freddyfinger responds:

thanks, im glad you liked it, i was thinking of just editing it and removing the end part out. the sample is 'why can't he be you' by patsy cline

My mannn

So chyllin, I was all like :O at 1:17 when those chimes or whatevea doubled up. Makes me happy in a fucked up way. Thank you good sir.

freddyfinger responds:

np thanks!

yeee, Agreed. This does have potential

Aside being a demo: At first, the change up at 0:21, sounded kinda off-- but it got better. The blips you added in(0:42), and the outra kinda messed with the entire structure of it all too. You might want to try repeating some bars, and just adding in minor change ups; to place a chorus at least. The rhythm and melodies are great-- but just needs to be a little more thought out.

Keep it up bro

RemixJB responds:

thanks for the comment :) appreciate it
i cant make it better :S lost it . but i got a new one now hehe
check it out

thanks ;)

This is tight

The music and flow go together well.
I like the layered vocals too, the background laughs and whatever-- It makes it seem too legit. Keep this stuff up, I want to hear more.

LyRikLyNkLyNd responds:

thanx dude

Congrats

On top 5. I heard this when you first released it, I loved it. It's deep. You can tell you worked real hard on this one. When it hits 1:30, omg man when I first heard that-- beautiful. That harmonization just felt so natural. (It sounds even better towards the end)

The piano solo is sexy too.

I would attempt to write nd record something to this, but I might just butcher it's greatness. Ahahaha good work again, pour your heart into shit more often. It's noticeably better.

haywirehaywire responds:

Thanks and ill follow that advice gladly.

Halp!

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Age 32, Male

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Toronto, ON

Joined on 10/30/03

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