Hmm..
That intro slays me. I'm not sure if your pause then the du du duu (1:20) fits in too well though.
That's my only problem with it, but otherwise.. Great :D
Hmm..
That intro slays me. I'm not sure if your pause then the du du duu (1:20) fits in too well though.
That's my only problem with it, but otherwise.. Great :D
ya thats definitely one of the "forced transitions" i had mentioned. im gonna try to find a smoother way to link those two parts.
thanks for the review.
Ahaha, The Definition of Sexy
Encore, BJames L.A. on the track.
Feelin real smooth, layin' down the mack.
Pavin' all the cracks, fillin all the gaps.
Specially the snatch- Hit 'em from the back!
Bitties like: too sexy?
Naww sit right next me.
Or baby call me next week.
Too busy feelin flow, HD on the repeat.
Know she's a hoe--
but she'll change the sheets. Hah
Major respect for this song.
yo that was a hot verse!? Thanks man...
This is sick
there's not too much, and it's not changed much. it's perfect for a slow smooth rap.. Is that alright if I use it?
I already made lyrics:
Got a plan, and I know it ain't right--
cause I'm caught in a sense that don't shine bright.
Unless you think about just her and I.
the light real dim, but it still feels nice.
Hah, i know she got a man. Though she still lookin back like she read my plan.
She knew from the start, mm, this girl's smart.
Plays it real smooth, ain't be breakin hearts.
Just finding her own, gotta 'spect that
Her minds just set on the right track,
trail, path whatever you like.
Dat I don't care, 'cause her motives are right.
Morals are too, sight too fine.
Don't say a word, she still pass the time.
Yo, girl know she can pass the time-
Don't mind if she calls my line.
This could be an everyday dessiirre
But she make me feel good, feelin higherr.
No thoughts gonna bring me down.
Sparks found on the tightrope wirree
This could be an everyday desirre.
Freezin up north? She can be the fire.
No thoughts gonna bring me down,
How could? When she rests in my town.
Damn, love this everyday desire.
Love it more when she stays a while.
When you gotta dip, no matter the mile-
Bring ya home safe just ta see your smile
Whats his name? Ken or kyle?
Hah, do you feel this? Is it worthwhile?
Can't compare a mountain to a pile.
I'm the whole store, he's just an aisle.
And if he was the store, and I was an aisle.
I'd have have my whole row line up with your style.
Inside and out babe, don't be shy, i'll
Keep no border, just order and I'll dial.
This could be an everyday desire.
I got the links all I need is a trial.
No thoughts gonna bring me down,
Cause she got me movin all around.
This could be an everyday desire.
Maybe a game but never in denial.
She still want my love, and
Know I'm never hostile.
email me at thegamereapa@yahoo.com
Love it.
I love hip hop, but I'm not a fan of the modern shit this is mocking.
I also love everything you post :D
You just made my day.
Haha, thanks very much. Glad you dig ma shit, bro. \m/
Omg
This is beautiful. Make more!
I'll try n get back on track since i moved. Thanks for that monster of a 10 though preciate it.
Yumm
Listening to this can help any rapper write some deep stuff.
A serious RnB track with this. Easily. Keep it up!!
Check out my stuff, it's nothing like this-- but I'd love to rap to one of your beats sometime.
I heard your stuff man. You got some skill. As for a collab, I'm down for one, but I kinda busy right now. I'll get back at you. Thanks for the review.
Wow.
5/5 10/10
I loved how everything went together.
I can't really say anything else, good job.
Thanks a lot! the final verison is about to be uploaded!!
Halp!
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