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yeee, Agreed. This does have potential

Aside being a demo: At first, the change up at 0:21, sounded kinda off-- but it got better. The blips you added in(0:42), and the outra kinda messed with the entire structure of it all too. You might want to try repeating some bars, and just adding in minor change ups; to place a chorus at least. The rhythm and melodies are great-- but just needs to be a little more thought out.

Keep it up bro

RemixJB responds:

thanks for the comment :) appreciate it
i cant make it better :S lost it . but i got a new one now hehe
check it out

thanks ;)

This is tight

The music and flow go together well.
I like the layered vocals too, the background laughs and whatever-- It makes it seem too legit. Keep this stuff up, I want to hear more.

LyRikLyNkLyNd responds:

thanx dude

Congrats

On top 5. I heard this when you first released it, I loved it. It's deep. You can tell you worked real hard on this one. When it hits 1:30, omg man when I first heard that-- beautiful. That harmonization just felt so natural. (It sounds even better towards the end)

The piano solo is sexy too.

I would attempt to write nd record something to this, but I might just butcher it's greatness. Ahahaha good work again, pour your heart into shit more often. It's noticeably better.

haywirehaywire responds:

Thanks and ill follow that advice gladly.

When you spit fast--

It gets too dirty, it's a bit unclear but you almost got that shit down. that's too tight man. Love this verse.

"They heard it they love it, I'm not gonna stop,
Can't hit me with bubble gum shots,
Subtle but hot, they tried holding me down on the mic but I rip through the muzzles and knots." that was my favourite part.

And that outro, oooh baby. Keep it up man

GloineFiodh responds:

word up. ya this was the first time I tried to spit that quick and its a pain in the dick to get that syllable count down.

Mmmmmmmmmmmm

Oh dude, right when it started I felt too groovy,
then that sax came in-- and I just sank so low all comfy like daaammmnnn.
You're settin the mood for real. I may make some sensual love with this song tonight. ;D

freddyfinger responds:

lol thanks (tip: she likes it when you tickle her ear lobe)

This is a great intro

The voice samples work perfectly with the title, and it's in time with the beat too. Too sick.

I like how the lyrics work as an introductory too.

BrothaGaget responds:

Thank you

Whooaaa

Not only is your voice great, but you can hear the rhythm you have; this song specifically. (Maybe 'cause of a little special influence? ;))

You can flow with the notes in harmony, it's a beautiful thing.

Out of all your other submissions, I think this is your best. Favourited? yep. Hope to see more works for 2010.

mmmm, Cheeesee

That organ is so delicious ahahahahah.
That bass line gets to me tho, I think it needs a little change up here nd there and this track will be golden.
Keep at it!!

This is too hype

That bass synth fits in so well. I'm not feelin' the vocal clips tho. Still sick shit tho.

Dirty--

is right! too sick. I like the mood you set. You always throw in that little eery feel, it's killer. The change up at 1:16, simple, but fits in quite nicely.

Some hip hop tracks you hear and can tell right away if you attempt to take the pen to it-- it'll just be garbage. But to this, I feel as if I can get some real deep shit goin. So, thankyou for this! Influential.

freddyfinger responds:

thanks a lot chista. 1:16 i originally had something a little more added to it than thought it might be better to just make it simple.

Halp!

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