RAAAAGGGGEE
Is what I'm feeling
RAAAAGGGGEE
Is what I'm feeling
YEESSS!
Yeeeeeeeeeee
So I was feelin this entirely, then 1:04 comes, and It turned better than amazing.
Yeeee.
The 9 is for feeling iffy at the strings
Okay, thanks, Chista.^^
HOLY C
wrap.
This is so sexy, I could fap to it.
O_O
MONNNNTAAAAGGGEEE!!!
MONNNTAAHHHGGEEE!!!!!!!!
MONTAGE!
MONTAGE!
This is sick. I can just picture them training really hard, then it all happening, intense dodging tiring out, hopping around. BANG! 1:53, someone got knocked, but they get up. Not ova' yet. I dunno, someone should use this in a flash for sure.
Glad you got your imagination going. That's what I was going for!
Hmm..
That intro slays me. I'm not sure if your pause then the du du duu (1:20) fits in too well though.
That's my only problem with it, but otherwise.. Great :D
ya thats definitely one of the "forced transitions" i had mentioned. im gonna try to find a smoother way to link those two parts.
thanks for the review.
Smoooth
Transitions so smooth.. it's so nice to flow to.
Would you mind if I use this beat to rap over? (Credit will obviously be displayed, and present within the lyrics)
Ahaha, The Definition of Sexy
Encore, BJames L.A. on the track.
Feelin real smooth, layin' down the mack.
Pavin' all the cracks, fillin all the gaps.
Specially the snatch- Hit 'em from the back!
Bitties like: too sexy?
Naww sit right next me.
Or baby call me next week.
Too busy feelin flow, HD on the repeat.
Know she's a hoe--
but she'll change the sheets. Hah
Major respect for this song.
yo that was a hot verse!? Thanks man...
This is sick
there's not too much, and it's not changed much. it's perfect for a slow smooth rap.. Is that alright if I use it?
I already made lyrics:
Got a plan, and I know it ain't right--
cause I'm caught in a sense that don't shine bright.
Unless you think about just her and I.
the light real dim, but it still feels nice.
Hah, i know she got a man. Though she still lookin back like she read my plan.
She knew from the start, mm, this girl's smart.
Plays it real smooth, ain't be breakin hearts.
Just finding her own, gotta 'spect that
Her minds just set on the right track,
trail, path whatever you like.
Dat I don't care, 'cause her motives are right.
Morals are too, sight too fine.
Don't say a word, she still pass the time.
Yo, girl know she can pass the time-
Don't mind if she calls my line.
This could be an everyday dessiirre
But she make me feel good, feelin higherr.
No thoughts gonna bring me down.
Sparks found on the tightrope wirree
This could be an everyday desirre.
Freezin up north? She can be the fire.
No thoughts gonna bring me down,
How could? When she rests in my town.
Damn, love this everyday desire.
Love it more when she stays a while.
When you gotta dip, no matter the mile-
Bring ya home safe just ta see your smile
Whats his name? Ken or kyle?
Hah, do you feel this? Is it worthwhile?
Can't compare a mountain to a pile.
I'm the whole store, he's just an aisle.
And if he was the store, and I was an aisle.
I'd have have my whole row line up with your style.
Inside and out babe, don't be shy, i'll
Keep no border, just order and I'll dial.
This could be an everyday desire.
I got the links all I need is a trial.
No thoughts gonna bring me down,
Cause she got me movin all around.
This could be an everyday desire.
Maybe a game but never in denial.
She still want my love, and
Know I'm never hostile.
email me at thegamereapa@yahoo.com
Lmfao this is tight
Goons are nuts
SkuM straight up hahh >.< Seriously.
Oh, and for a review; J-Kellz, I'm speechless. I can't tell if its because the flow, the scheme or the GOON; AO I felt you needed more enthusiasm.. just a bit though. Like chill with the goons for the night kinda shit ya digg. Other than that :O BOMBTINGSS!! Hope to join in next time :D
Halp!
Age 33, Male
Lyricist
Toronto, ON
Joined on 10/30/03